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Learn how to write a press release journalists actually read. Structure, headlines, leads, quotes, boilerplate, and the checklist before you hit send.
The press release is the oldest format in PR and one of the most consistently misused. Walk through any PR team’s output for a month and you’ll find a common pattern: real news buried under a layer of management-approved superlatives, leads that open with company history instead of the story, and quotes that sound like they were written by a committee rather than said by a person.
The format itself is not broken. It’s a precise editorial instrument – the rough draft of a story you want a journalist to write. When it’s done right, it does a journalist’s first pass for them: it identifies the news, structures the key facts, and makes the case for coverage in under 400 words. When it’s done wrong, it reads like an internal announcement dressed up in a press release template.
How to write a press release: what actually counts as news
Before writing a single word, answer one question honestly: is this newsworthy?
News has identifiable qualities. Timeliness – something happened recently or will happen soon. Significance – it matters to a defined audience beyond your company. Novelty – it is genuinely new, not a restatement of something already known. Relevance – it connects to something the readers of your target publication actively care about.
Most press release failures happen here, not in the writing. A new hire may be significant internally but rates a LinkedIn post, not a release, unless the person is recognizable in the industry or the hire signals something meaningful about the company’s direction. A product update may be important for customers but isn’t news for a general business publication unless it changes how an entire category of work gets done.
Run any planned release through this test: “If I were a reader of [target publication], would I want to know this?” The answer has to be unambiguous. If it requires any mental gymnastics – “well, if they’re interested in SaaS and logistics and follow German Mittelstand tech…” – the news hook isn’t strong enough yet.
Find a stronger angle before writing. Product releases become news when they contain benchmark data. Partnerships become news when both parties are recognizable. Funding rounds become news when the round is large enough to signal something about the market or the investor has a track record that matters.
The structure every journalist recognizes
A press release follows a standard structure for a practical reason: journalists skim before they read, and the structure tells them where to find the story.
The six components:
Headline – One sentence. The news in active voice, with specifics.
Subheadline – Optional. Supporting context that adds one layer of detail without repeating the headline.
Dateline – City, date: “Berlin, April 14, 2026 –” This signals jurisdiction and timeliness.
Lead paragraph – The complete story in 35 to 40 words. Answers who, what, when, where, and why.
Body paragraphs – Additional detail, quotes, context, and supporting data in descending order of importance. If a journalist cuts from the bottom up, the story remains intact at the top.
Boilerplate and contact – A short company description identical across all releases, followed by a media contact with a direct phone number and email.
This structure is the inverted pyramid, borrowed directly from journalism. The most important information at the top; the supporting and background material below. Every editorial choice you make – what goes in the lead, what goes in paragraph two, what goes in paragraph four – is a judgment about relative importance.
Writing a headline that works
A press release headline has one job: communicate the news in a sentence a journalist would recognize as publishable.
The mechanics:
- Active voice. “Route42 raises €12M to expand freight routing AI” beats “New Funding Round Announced by Route42.”
- Specificity. Named companies, named amounts, named technologies. Generic descriptions – “leading provider,” “innovative solution” – delete themselves from consideration.
- No marketing language. “Revolutionary,” “cutting-edge,” “industry-leading” – these words are signals that you’re writing a marketing document. A journalist reading them adjusts their expectations accordingly.
- No questions. A headline is a statement. “Is AI changing logistics?” is a rhetorical device, not a news headline.
Weak: “Innovative Hamburg-Based Logistics Company Announces Exciting Strategic Partnership to Revolutionize Supply Chain Management”
Strong: “Route42 and DB Schenker partner to automate spot freight routing for Mittelstand clients, launching Q3 2026”
The second version names both parties, specifies the application, names the target market, and gives a timeline. A transport editor knows immediately whether this is a story for their section.
The lead paragraph: 35 words, no exceptions
The lead paragraph is where most press releases collapse. Instead of putting the news first, writers put context first: founding year, company size, mission statement, industry category. By the time the actual announcement arrives, the journalist has closed the email.
A strong lead answers five questions in one paragraph – 35 to 40 words:
Who is involved (named people or organizations, not descriptions like “a leading provider”) What happened (the concrete event, decision, funding round, product launch, or finding) When it happened or will happen Where it is relevant or occurred Why it matters – the significance, not just the fact
Weak lead: “Route42, a Hamburg-based logistics technology company committed to transforming the supply chain industry, today announced an exciting new strategic development that will benefit its growing customer base.”
Strong lead: “Hamburg logistics startup Route42 has closed a €12 million Series A led by HV Capital to expand its AI-powered freight routing software to 200 Mittelstand clients across Germany by end of 2026.”
The strong lead is specific. It contains real names, a real amount, a real investor, a real technology category, a real market, and a real timeline. The journalist can write the first paragraph of their story using only your lead paragraph – that is the correct test for a strong lead.
Quotes that journalists can actually print
Every press release includes quotes. Most of those quotes are unprintable in their current form.
A quote in a press release serves a specific journalistic function: it lets the journalist attribute an opinion or interpretation without it becoming their own. That only works if the quote sounds like something a human being would genuinely say.
Hollow: “We are thrilled to announce this milestone partnership which will allow both organizations to leverage our respective core competencies and deliver enhanced value to all stakeholders.”
That sentence was never said aloud by a person in a meeting. It was assembled from PR templates and will be paraphrased or cut by any journalist who respects their readers.
Usable: “Most freight forwarders are still routing manually because no platform yet reflects how their clients actually buy in the spot market. We built this integration specifically for that gap.”
The second quote identifies a problem, takes a position, and explains the reason for the partnership in terms that a business journalist’s readers will recognize as interesting. Print it verbatim and it reads like a person who understands their market.
One practical rule: limit quotes to two per release. One from your own leadership, one from a partner or customer if relevant. Anything beyond two and the release starts reading like a compendium of attributed statements rather than a news story.
The boilerplate and contact block
The boilerplate – the “About [Company]” paragraph at the end – is the same text that appears at the bottom of every release you send. It has one job: give a journalist enough background to reference your company accurately on first mention.
Keep it to three to five sentences. Include what the company does in one sentence, who it serves in one sentence, and one or two credibility anchors – year founded, number of customers, notable investors, or a verifiable milestone. No adjectives. No mission statements. No aspirations.
The contact block matters more than most people realize. List a person who will actually answer the phone. Not media@company.com. A real name, a direct number, and an email address of someone who can respond to a journalist on deadline within two hours. Journalists working on a story that goes live tonight can’t wait for a 48-hour response from a generic inbox.
The embargo: when and how to use it
An embargo is a negotiated agreement between you and a journalist to hold publication until a specific date and time. It exists to give journalists time to prepare a more thorough story in advance of a planned announcement.
When embargoes work: you have news with genuine lead value (a significant funding round, a major study with notable findings, a partnership that will generate broad interest), and you want to offer select journalists the time to develop it fully before lift.
When they fail: you use them for news that doesn’t warrant the extra negotiation, you send to too many journalists simultaneously, or the embargo breaks because you sent to someone who didn’t agree to hold it.
Standard format at the top of the document: “EMBARGOED UNTIL [Day], [Date], [Time], [Timezone]”
For news that is ready to go immediately, “FOR IMMEDIATE RELEASE” at the top. No embargo needed, no negotiation required.
One practical note: don’t offer embargoes to the full distribution list. Reserve them for publications whose coverage you’re specifically trying to shape – a trade outlet that covers your sector thoroughly, or a business daily with strong reach in your target market.
Adapting your release for the target publication
A press release going to the Frankfurter Allgemeine Zeitung’s Wirtschaft desk has different requirements than one going to a specialized logistics trade publication. The news hook is the same. The emphasis is not.
For a national business daily, the angle needs to pass a scale test: does this matter to business readers broadly, not just to people working in this specific sector? Funding round announcements work here when the amount is significant or the investor is prominent. Product updates rarely make it unless the product is a category-defining change.
For trade publications, specialist context lands differently. You can assume more domain knowledge. You can lead with the technical significance rather than needing to establish why freight routing matters. Trade journalists appreciate specificity their general-assignment colleagues would find too granular.
For wire services – AP, Reuters, dpa – the release competes against hundreds of others for limited editorial bandwidth. The news needs to be genuinely significant, the writing needs to be clean enough to publish with minimal editing, and the lead needs to stand alone without any additional context.
The checklist before you send
Before any press release leaves your outbox:
- The headline is specific, active, and free of marketing language
- The lead paragraph answers who, what, when, where, and why in 35-40 words
- Every fact in the release can be independently verified by a journalist
- Quotes sound like a person speaking, not a committee writing
- Body paragraphs follow the inverted pyramid – most important first
- Boilerplate is current and under five sentences
- The media contact listed will answer within two hours on deadline
- No jargon that a non-specialist journalist wouldn’t understand
- Embargo details are explicit if applicable
- Distribution list matches the news – trade editors for specialist news, business desks for broad-reach stories
Once the release is written, the question shifts from craft to targeting: which journalists, at which publications, are actually working on stories adjacent to this announcement right now. That’s a different discipline from writing. For a practical approach to building and refining your distribution targets, see our guide on how to find the right journalist and how to build a media list.
The press release is a starting point, not a guarantee. A well-written release with accurate targeting gets read. A well-written release sent to the wrong people gets ignored. And a poorly written release sent to the right people gets remembered – for the wrong reasons.
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